Bit of a turn around….

After doing two weeks of work and being really up to date with all of my work Olwen gave me a list of alternative organisations that might have been a better choice instead of Guerrilla Girls. I found the list really useful and therefore decided to change my organisation so I had to re-do everything I had done so far in one day! Amazingly I managed to interview the director of the company ‘All walks beyond the catwalk’ which I was so happy about as I had previously contacted so many companies and no one had responded in a useful way. I then re-wrote my entire proposal:

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I do now feel a lot happier with this choice and i’m hoping that getting through to the director and interviewing her improved my proposal. I did find it very useful and exciting speaking to her and of course grateful that she gave me some of her time and allowed me to record it.

Maslow’s Hierarchy Of Needs

So, after having our lecture on Maslow’s hierarchy we had to pick a video and discuss it in relation to the hierarchy. I looked at the Haribo Starmix advert 2014:

– It shows a sense of belongingness as they are all part of a business group.
– It also shows achievement, status, responsibility and reputation due to the fact they are part of a professional business group.
– There is also a link to food, basic needs and security of employment.
– The childish voices creates a sense of young friendships and being part of a friends group..being brought together by the sweets and having something in common.

I found the slideshow quite eye opening as to how cleverly planned around the Hierarchy of needs adverts are and how subtly it is done.

Contacting further companies and writing a proposal

After emailing four more companies sadly I continued to still have no replies! I was pretty gutted about this as I was interested in what they had to say and it would also make writing the proposal a little harder. Due to this problem I began to research the Guerrilla Girls even more thoroughly, watching all of their videos and reading all of their answers to questions that they had been previously asked. I now feel as though I have a pretty thorough grasp on what they are about and what they stand for!  We decided that if i didn’t hear back from them by Friday to start my proposal anyway as best as possible with the knowledge that I have, so that’s why I ended up having to do..

Here is my current proposal:

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After submitting our proposals we received a general email with some pointers for improving them in order to resubmit in a couple of days.

– Remember that the proposal aims to reassure the client that you understand their communication needs that you are ‘on brief’. Therefore it should have been written for your client rather than for a tutor.
– There was no need for more than two pages. One should be enough in most cases. You should also avoid overlong line lengths often caused by Microsoft Word’s default new page settings. You can easily alter the margins.
– It was good to include a logo where possible but It was a little disappointing that many of you failed to include your own name in the document. In fact, it would have been sensible to start your proposal with a header before the subheads containing:
Designer’s name (your name): Ian Weir
Client/organisation: David Shoutsloud, Greenpeace (include a contact name if possible)
Project/Issue/aim: Raising awareness of the declining number of Arctic Foxes
Date: 9 March 2015

Some of these points I have already done in my proposal so I am happy with that but i’m disappointed in myself that I didn’t even think to include my name, client, project, date, etc!

Persuasion – Contacting companies..

After doing our Pecha Kuchas we had to start contacting the companies that we mentioned in our presentations. So, I emailed M&S, Boots and Debenhams and then tried calling them all. I managed to get through to Boots however they didn’t want to answer my questions.. which sadly wasn’t very useful for me. M&S sent me an automated email telling me that they couldn’t email me back directly with any answers. Debenhams didn’t seem to understand what I had sent and replied with an automated message about work experience and applying for a job. Apart from this I had created my own lists of questions and had filled out the ethics form however at this point (other than in depth research) it was quite difficult for me to make drastic advances. As I was a little worried at this stage about making substantial progress I had a quick chat with Ian after the Proposal lecture with Paul. We thought that a good approach to take would be looking at some Feminist pressure groups that would back the issue that I have looked into, so I found some organisations to email such as ‘Guerilla Girls’, ‘UK Feminista’ and ‘thefword.org.uk’.

New project! Persuasion..

So, we have started our new subject project called Persuasion, which after the briefing sounded really good! It sounds slightly different to all of our previous projects so far, especially as we are contacting real companies/organisations as well as putting together our own briefs. The first step was to choose an issue or problem, or just something that we are passionate about therefore I decided to pick the topic of body politics and role models within the media. We had to research our topics in depth and deliver a pecha cucha the following week, which I do always get fairly nervous about due to the public speaking. As I was passionate about this topic I thought that researching and gathering information about it would be easy however I found it more difficult than all previous pecha kuchas. I had so many areas to look into the my research was very time consuming as I wanted to really look into each aspect of it properly. Although I believed in what I was saying, I wanted to word it very carefully as not to offend anyone which I thought was going to be hard as it was a bit of a touchy subject.

Here is my pecha kucha with notes….

1I’m going to be talking about body politics and role models represented within the media.
I will also investigate the “perfect body”.
I will start by talking about underweight models however will lead onto speaking about overweight models, body changes, health and the history of the human body shape.

2Before completing my pecha kucha I must express that I don’t condone underweight/unhealthy models.
However I don’t want to wholly concentrate on this end of the scale as I want to incorporated many other factors of what a role model is.

3Israel has hugely tackled the problem of underweight models and introduced a new law in 2013.
First country to introduce a law whereby models most produce medical reports and must not have a bmi lower than 18.5.
They focus on health.
Anything that they digitally alter or enhance must be made clear to the audience.

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The Victoria Secret Ad created a huge uproar as they only used one type of (slim) model alongside a “Perfect body slogan.
This effects women self esteem as well as increasing men’s expectation of women.
It is understandable that people and companies fought against this (harmful marketing).

5Some history of the female figure.
1900s-1950s – figures appeared varied and healthy as did the role models.
Of course there’s a focus on appearance but there always has been and always will be.
During the 30s & 40s there were ads promoting the avoidance of being underweight.
They were into being physically active and healthy.


660s – 90s is when the change began.
Twiggy was a huge role model, although she was slim she was naturally slight and it was in her genes.
The 70s saw a rise in eating disorders.
90s were drastically thinner – the waif look was fashion.
They used terms such as “Nothing tastes as good as skinny feels”.
The media began to really promote unhealthy views of women.

7I didn’t want to wholly focus on this side of road models as it has been a problem for years.
It is slowly being tackled and I hope that more countries follow in the footsteps of Israel.

8

Debenhams have vowed to ban airbrushing.
Their ethos is about making women feel good about themselves and not eroding their self esteem by using false comparisons.
They explored airbrush tricks and have banned airbrushing from some of their ad campaigns.
They try to just stick with minor editing such as removing stray hairs.

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Dove counteracted the Victoria Secret shoot with “The perfect real body”.
They tried to celebrate the REAL woman, although this is good to tackle, in some ways it’s just as bad as they also roughly included only one shape and size (curvy) which is unfair to all the other shapes and naturally slimmer/boyish figures for example.

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JD Williams also spoke out about VS models as they also do underwear modelling. They Call these women (top image) plus size models which I find outrageous as they are all around size 12. This is not supporting variety and nor does it represent a diverse or natural non glossy representation of women.

11This is the new plus size model Tess Holliday, a body acceptance activist who has caused a lot of controversy. She is size 22, 5 foot 5 and has a bmi of 44.2.
I definitely am not fat shaming and she was bullied when younger however as I don’t think underweight models are acceptable more do I agree with so hugely obese modelling. Everyone gets turned from jobs so it isn’t hugely outrageous that she got turned down as a model when younger. She does have good views about natural beauty and being happy in your own skin.

12I would never say that Tess is unattractive however in my opinion if it’s ok for Tess to be represented as a role model surely it should be ok for the one on the left to be too.
Neither of these women are really capturing and promoting what health is.
Neither looks were promoted between the 1900s and 1960s.

13It is admirable that she does not adhere to photoshopping.
She did however say “This has ZERO to do with health and all to do with believing in yourself”.
She works out regularly however there are studies to say that many obese people are metabolically healthy (normal blood pressure, sugars etc) however it leaves out other health risks & the possibility of premature mortality.

14It is true that obese people can live long and moderately healthy lives but so can heavy smokers.
We don’t ever promote smoking, in fact it is all about anti-smoking and how harmful it can be, even on the packages themselves.
I feel that it isn’t good promotion with the huge increase in obesity.

15These three women are considered to be plus size and were used to combat eating disorders.
Purely calling them plus size models is making women think differently about their size.
I don’t think they should be called plus size as they look visually healthy.

16I then looked at the definition of health which is “Health is a state of complete physical, mental and social wellbeing and not merely the absence of disease or infirmity” this hasn’t been amended since 1948.
I feel that the Israelian law is positive in regards to health.

17When choosing a campaign I initially thought Dove.
I saw one of their ads which included a variety of women however it was accompanied by “Health is the new skinny”. This is pretty much implying skinny/slim as a negative and not “in” anymore. Whereas they should celebrate all sizes fairly.

GROUP 1558.jpgI then decided on m&s. When looking through their ads I noticed that they included all ages and healthy sizes. I didn’t see many slogans trying to get ‘one-ups’ on anyone else.
Unfortunately I still found flaws such as all the women being almost the same height and how extremely photoshopped they are.

19I decided to finally choose Debenhams.
They are the first high street shop to sign a new code of conduct for models’ working conditions.
They use a diverse variety of models, including disabled models.
They try to champion healthy body images and banned airbrushing in some of their shoots which is a big step considering the competition around them.
They are about positive body image in general.

20I chose this issue because there is no such thing as a ‘perfect body’ and organisations trying to get one ups on each other isn’t working as few organisations actually show any variety or naturalness of the human body. I feel that no extremity should be considered as a role model – health should.

I was pretty nervous to deliver this but I think it went well and i’m really glad that I research it so thoroughly. My feedback was pretty positive and I was told that I sounded passionate and that it was well researched.